Thanks, Axel.  So you're asking for us to clarify in the privacy policy the 
kind of communication they might receive after they've opted-in?  More 
specifics? If so, I think that makes sense.  

On Wednesday, July 25, 2012 4:11:41 PM UTC-7, Axel Hecht wrote:
> Hi Winston,
> 
> two comments:
> 
> > Unless you opt-in to ongoing SMS messaging, the mobile phone number 
> > you input on the website will be used and stored only for the purpose 
> > of sending this one-time message and to provide abuse blocking, where 
> > available.
> 
> If I negate that sentence, I get:
> 
> If you opt-in to ongoing SMS messaging, we can do whatever.
> 
> Also, you're making the grammar of that sentence harder to understand 
> than necessary. I think the policy should be simple English as much as 
> possible, given that many non-native speakers will read it.
> 
> "If you opt-out to ongoing SMS messaging, ...." says the same 
> thing. 
> Though it's more obvious that you're not really qualifying what one 
> would opt-in to. Which is my first comment.
> 
> Axel

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