Hey Tobbi, Yep - the team thought knowing the exact data was so important that this is why the product itself shows you the types of data collected and the actual data being sent. The policy is more high level and less descriptive because of its role in the overall notice framework.
On your language note - point taken - Gijs had a similar comment - we can make it clearer. Thanks Jishnu On Sunday, May 12, 2013 2:53:17 AM UTC-7, [email protected] wrote: > Hey, > > > > if I was a very concerned person, I might not want to know *what data is NOT > sent*, but rather, *what data is actually sent*. So, describing that in a > more detailled way might be a good thing. "Designed to minimize our ability > to identify your browser" is a very vague term for me. Also, I think it > should use the term "personal data" instead of "identifying the browser" > because in my opinion, that's a term more commonly known. > > > > --Tobbi > > > > On Tuesday, May 7, 2013 1:12:00 AM UTC+2, [email protected] wrote: > > > Hi All, > > > > > > > > > > > > We’re soliciting feedback for proposed privacy policy text describing the > > Firefox Health Report feature for Firefox: > > > > > > > > > > > > /begin text > > > > > > > > > > > > Firefox Health Report (“FHR”) is a feature in Firefox designed to provide > > you with insights about your browser’s stability and performance. FHR does > > this by collecting data and sharing it with us in a way designed to > > minimize our ability to identify your browser. Our systems aggregate your > > data with that of other Firefox users and then send it back to your browser > > so you can see how your Firefox performance compares to others. FHR does > > not send us URLs from your browsing history. > > > > > > > > > > > > We use the data sent through FHR to provide users with FHR’s functionality, > > such as helping you analyze and address performance issues with your > > browser. We also use the insight we learn from the FHR data in the > > aggregate to make Firefox and our other products better. We may disclose > > aggregated FHR data openly in order to help further our mission of > > promoting openness, innovation and opportunity on the web. We aim to be > > transparent about FHR and you can learn more about the exact data being > > sent to us in the feature itself. If you wish, you can disable FHR data > > sharing in Firefox settings or the feature itself. [Learn more about FHR]. > > [URL to support page] > > > > > > > > > > > > /end text > > > > > > > > > > > > Please let me know what you think of the text here and if you've got > > questions about FHR, please join the discussion in the dev-fhr mailing list > > (https://mail.mozilla.org/listinfo/fhr-dev/). > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks > > > > > > Jishnu _______________________________________________ governance mailing list [email protected] https://lists.mozilla.org/listinfo/governance
