Dear Michael, Perhaps a question was taken as a suggestion, but the draft doesn’t describe how it updates either RFC.
Removing the updates section indeed is an option! Kind regards, Job On Tue, 6 Feb 2024 at 21:09, Michael McBride <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Job, > > That is based on a list comment from a few years ago: > > "Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending-03.txt > Michael McBride <[email protected]> Fri, 19 March 2021 03:36 > UTCShow header > > >Is this going to update BCP194/RFC7454? I don't see any reference in the > draft. > > We probably should. Good suggestion. I was thinking updating 8195 but 7454 > appears more appropriate. > > We will update the draft, based upon comments from last week, and add 7454 > unless we hear otherwise." > > > We didn't hear otherwise. We can remove the updates section if it doesn't > make sense. > > Thanks, > mike > > -----Original Message----- > From: Job Snijders <[email protected]> > Sent: Tuesday, February 6, 2024 11:13 AM > To: Michael McBride <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending-09.txt > > Dear Michael, > > Before we proceed, can you clarify how exactly > draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending updates RFC 7454 and RFC 8195? > > In relationship to 8195, the only sentence I see is "AS Path Prepending is > discussed in Use of BGP Large Communities [RFC8195]." - which is true > (8915 contains an example about prepending once), however the rest of the > text in draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending-10 doesn't seem an 'update' in > IETF document logistics parlance? > > Kind regards, > > Job > > On Tue, Feb 06, 2024 at 06:23:13PM +0000, Michael McBride wrote: > > Hello grow chairs, > > > > Any chance we can get a wglc started on this draft after this latest > > round of edits? The authors have felt it's ready for quite some time. > > It's going on four years now. Please consider. > > > > Thanks, > > mike > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: GROW <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Michael McBride > > Sent: Tuesday, January 16, 2024 11:21 PM > > To: Martin Pels <[email protected]>; [email protected] > > Subject: Re: [GROW] I-D Action: > > draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending-09.txt > > > > Hi Martin, > > > > I just submitted a new version to address your (and Alejandro's) > comments. See my comments in line (MM): > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: GROW <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Martin Pels > > Sent: Tuesday, January 9, 2024 1:00 AM > > To: [email protected] > > Subject: Re: [GROW] I-D Action: > > draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending-09.txt > > > > Hi, > > > > Some comments > > ------------- > > > > Section 3.1 and 4: > > As has been mentioned before on this list, I think using the term "route > leak" in this scenario is confusing. Something like "suboptimal" or > "unintended" routing would be a better fit. > > > > MM: Done. Used both terms in place of route leak. > > > > 3.2 and 3.3: > > These do not appear to be separate problems, but rather two examples of > the same problem (a malicious, shorter route being preferred over a > legitimate, prepended route). > > > > MM: I think it is ok to describe two similar problems. > > > > 7: > > This only mentions the sending side. There is also security advice to be > given to the accepting side (see section 3.5 and 3.6). Something like > "Accepting routes with extremely long AS_PATHs may cause increased memory > usage and possibly router crashes." > > > > MM: I inserted exactly that sentence. > > > > A reference to ASPA may also be useful in this section, since this could > help mitigate the effects of the route leaks described in 3.2 and 3.3. > > > > MM: Good idea, I added a sentence on ASPA. > > > > Text nits > > --------- > > > > Abstract: > > AS_Path attribute -> AS_PATH attribute > > > > MM: Done > > > > multiple entries of an AS -> multiple entries of an ASN > > > > MM: Done > > > > This document provides guidance with -> This document provides > > guidance for > > > > MM: Done > > > > 1: > > the AS_PATH attribute which -> the AS_PATH attribute, which > > > > MM: Done > > > > 2: > > today including -> today, including > > > > MM: Done > > > > 4: > > more then 1 -> more than 1 > > > > MM: Done > > > > Thank you! 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