Hi Tobias/Nick,

We need to check how we cite some of the drafts in draft-ietf-grow-bgpopsecupd.

I think you already know but "Normative references specify documents that must 
be read to understand or implement the technology in the new RFC, or whose 
technology must be present for the technology in the new RFC to work".

With that in mind, draft-ietf-sidrops-avoid-rpki-state-in-bgp should be listed 
as Informative as the only mention is in an example:

CURRENT:
   *  NLRI carried on BGP MUST NOT be enriched with transitive
      attributes subject to change independent of the underlying NLRI,
      e.g., encoding RPKI validation state in transitive attributes
      [I-D.draft-ietf-sidrops-avoid-rpki-state-in-bgp].

For ietf-grow-routing-ops-sec-inform and draft-ietf-grow-routing-ops-terms, I'm 
a little bit puzzled how we cite them:

CURRENT:
   Instead, readers MAY refer to the most recent non expired draft of
   [I-D.draft-ietf-grow-routing-ops-sec-inform] for an updated list of
   currently available technology to ensure the above principles, and
   the most recent non expired draft of
   [I-D.draft-ietf-grow-routing-ops-terms] for information on currently
   used terms and definitions in the context of global routing
   operations.  Readers MUST NOT rely on expired versions of these I-Ds.
   If no most recent non-expired version of either I-D is available, the
   document MUST be considered to be non-existent.

I don't think the normative language is needed here as these are provided as 
additional information for more context. These are not required to understand 
or implement draft-ietf-grow-bgpopsecupd. Also, both I-D mentions seems to be 
out of context in a security considerations section. Did I miss something?

Can we please rework this part to avoid creating normative dependency that 
would hinder the publication of draft-ietf-grow-bgpopsecupd?

One nit, please s/I-D.draft/I-D. through the draft.

Thank you.

Cheers,
Med
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