On Thu, 16 Oct 2003, Alon Altman wrote:

> Hi,
>   My Hebrew lecture is complete (for now). Please proofread it and suggest
> corrections. It is available at http://alon.wox.org/hebrewlec/
>
>   Alon
>
>

In:

http://alon.wox.org/hebrewlec/node7.html#h

There's a trailing slash in the path to the XF86Config file instead of
a leading slash. ditto for XkbMap.

In: http://alon.wox.org/hebrewlec/node11.html#h

"Bemida Ve" - Bemida Ve is an incorrect form. Use "Bemida She".

In: http://alon.wox.org/hebrewlec/node18.html#h

"Ha'akademith" ==> Ha'akademia

Other than that: a nit-pick. Are you sure it is a good idea to refer to
Linux as GNU/Linux? Some people only heard of "Linux" and would wonder
what the GNU/ means and if it's different than plain Linux.

Regards,

        Shlomi Fish





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