On Fri, 13 Feb 2004, Alon Altman wrote:

> Hi,
>   I have a preliminary version of the Multimedia lecture slides available
> online at http://alon.wox.org/multimedia-lecture/
>

I miss  info about webcams, digital cameras, scanners. At least a point
to begin with, a name or a program that is likely to do the trick for
many cases (like you put the screens/logos of good GUI programs). I know
you are tight on time, so maybe somebody else can help with those slides?

And now to the current slides:

I miss a contents table.

slide 4: simulate regular oss? you mean stop muxing? or when you have
alsa? or ?

slide 6:
s/It's/Its/ (In the beginning of the second sentence)

ths dynamic nature of mplayer: do you mean that it uses dynamic linking,
or that it changes a lot, so often that recently downloaded parts do not
match?

you wrote "If want to install".

slide 13:

you wrote "you need that source data be put". You can change it to "you
need the source data put" or to "you need the source data to be put".

slide 14 :

overfull hbox

slide 15:
again you direct to man mkisofs. maybe you want to omit the man reference
on page 14?

slide 16:

s/This is by using/This is done by using/

slide 19:

overfull hbox

I want to note that the logos/screen-shots are a very nice touch.

Orna.

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