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On 20/07/14 08:56, Ken Fallon wrote:
> I would like to propose the following changes:
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Very good. I like the request for comments on the show. I always feel
that these are what make the process of recording a show for HPR
particularly rewarding.

I spotted two issues:

1. Punctuation: "Todays show" should be "Today's show" - in case you're
going to put the text out there.

2. An omission:
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If you have comments today's show please email the host directly, leave
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"...comments on today's..."

Dave
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