Hi Roman, Thanks for your excellent leading and kind help on this I2NSF NSF-Facing YANG Data Model Draft.
I sincerely appreciate our I2NSF WG Chairs (Linda & Yoav) and WG members. This is all our great achievement :-) Best Regards, Paul On Mon, May 16, 2022 at 8:41 PM Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Paul! > > > > Thanks for this last update on this document too. I’ve advanced it for > publication. > > > > Congratulations and thanks for the hard work. > > > > Roman > > > > > > *From:* Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <[email protected]> > *Sent:* Saturday, May 14, 2022 5:38 AM > *To:* Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> > *Cc:* [email protected]; skku-iotlab-members < > [email protected]>; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < > [email protected]> > *Subject:* Re: [I2nsf] Post IESG feedback on > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-26 > > > > Hi Roman, > > I have reflected your comments on the revision of the I2NSF NSF-Facing > Interface YANG Data Model draft: > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-27#page-80 > > > > Thanks. > > > > Best Regards, > > Paul > > > > > > On Sat, May 14, 2022 at 5:16 AM Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi! > > Thank you for all of the edits on draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm > which largely resolved IESG feedback. > > I'm going to ask for few more editorial fixes: > > (1) (from idnits) > > -- The abstract seems to contain references > ([I-D.ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model]), which it shouldn't. Please > replace those with straight textual mentions of the documents in > question. > > I response to IESG feedback I believe a reference was added into the > abstract. Please revert to the earlier text which had not reference. > > -- Outdated reference: draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location has been published > as RFC 9179 > > (2) In response to Éric Vyncke's ballot, references to an information > model were removed. There is one more place in the introduction to Section > 4 where this still needs to be done. > > I've advanced the document to "Approved-announcement to be sent::Revised > I-D Needed". > > Again, thanks for all of the work here. > Roman > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf > >
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