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There is a big typo in Section 2.1 The ISOC board of Trustees, the IAB, and the IAOC will appoint two s/IAOC/IESG/ Nits Section 1 an integrated perspective about their bodies work to the IAOC. s/bodies/body's/ Section 2.2 s/Two member /Two members / on 3 bulleted lines. Section 2.3, title 2.3. IAOC membership * * * * * * s/IAOC/IETF Trust/ On Tue, Jul 26, 2011 at 8:52 AM, Olaf Kolkman <[email protected]> wrote: > > Dear Colleagues, > > > > > > Based on the discussion I've updated the draft: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-kolkman-iasa-ex-officio-membership > > Essentially I incorporated Dave Crocker's proposal to > 1) replace the 'chairs' by voting members appointed by the respective > bodies. > 2) allow the chairs to participate in all meetings and provide > (unsolicited) advice. > > I believe that allows chairs to exercise their responsibilities of keeping > a coherent perspective of the organization an allow them to steer outcomes > if needed, but doesn't require the day-to-day involvement that is required > from a diligent voting member. > > --Olaf > > ________________________________________________________ > > Olaf M. Kolkman NLnet Labs > http://www.nlnetlabs.nl/ > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Ietf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf > >
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