One minor error: 
If the string @samp{@@sys} appears in a file name to be used in
@sc{AFS}, it is automagically replaced with @sc{AFS}'s concept of the
@dfn{type} of the machine that the file name is being expanded on.

The @sys will not be translated if it is merely embedded in a file
name.  It might be better to say something more like:
" If an element of a pathname is @sys, it will be replaced with the value
returned by 'fs sysname', which is AFS's concept of the type of machine..."

That's not perfect, either.  Guess that's why I'm not a tech writer.


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