>> it certainly make things better. i would like to see description
>> in page 3 much shortened to avoid (possible) inconsistencies.
>I'd prefer not shortening this text, as it is explanatory/introductory
>for the novice reader. But, it should not be the definitive text.
hmm. as long as there's no inconsistency, i'm okay.
>Looking further in the document, there is specific text that says:
>
>> 5.5.4. Address Lifetime Expiry
>>
>I would prefer clarifying the text here. How about changing the first
>paragraph as follows:
>
> A preferred address becomes deprecated when its preferred lifetime
> expires. A deprecated address SHOULD continue to be used as a
> source address in existing communications, but SHOULD NOT be used
> to initiate new communications if an alternate (non-deprecated)
> address of sufficient scope can easily be used instead. Note that
> the feasibility of initiating new communication using a
> non-deprecated address may be an application-specific decision, as
> only the application may have knowledge about whether the (now)
> deprecated address was (or still is) in use by the application.
> IP and higher layers (e.g., TCP, UDP) MUST continue to accept and
> process datagrams destined to a deprecated address as normal since
> a deprecated address is still a valid address for the
> interface. In the case of TCP, this means TCP SYN segments sent to
> a deprecated address are responded to using the deprecated address
> as a source address in the corresponding SYN-ACK (if the
> connection would otherwise be allowed). An implementation MAY
> prevent any new communication from using a deprecated address, but
> system management MUST have the ability to disable such a
> facility, and the facility MUST be disabled by default.
>
>Would this address your concerns?
looks great!
itojun
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