Hi Seb,

Sebastien Lelong wrote:
> 
> Can you have a look at this mail I've prepared to announce the first release
> in jallist ? I plan to create the 0.1beta branches, build and upload
> packages tonight. And eventually posting this mail, as the official release
> starting point :)

GREAT!

I think the text is OK.  There are some small language errors, but who 
cares?

About: "the Jallib Team":
You see this kind of term used everywhere. It sounds good, but I hate it 
when I cannot find who are behind that name (and I suspect that 
frequently it is only one person)!  So I suggest to keep the term Jallib 
Team, but add an URL to it which opens a list of participants for those 
who insist to know  ;-)


Suggestions for some textual changes inline below:


> -----
> Hi all,
> 
> 
> We are proud to announce the very first beta release of Jallib. The Jallib
> project (http://code.google.com/p/jallib/) holds a set of jal libraries,
> compatible with jalv2 compiler. The aim of this project is to centralize all
> the libraries people are writing here and there, provides standards to write
> jal code, helping to share code.

replace 'here and there' -> 'all over the  world'
         ' provides -> 'and provide'

> 
> You can download the packages here:
> 
>     http://code.google.com/p/jallib/downloads/list
> 
> There are two main packages:
> 
>   * jallib-0.1beta contains device files, libraries, and samples which have
> been tested. This means more than 70 PICs, 17 libraries (usart, i2c, pwm,
> adc, data eeprom, lcd, print, format, delay, ...) and over 85 samples to
> help you getting started with jallib.
> 
>    * jallib-all_devices-0.1beta contains all the available devices (for 294
> PICs), and for each, a blink-a-led sample, ready-to-compile. Some have been
> tested, some haven't yet. If you're favorite PIC cannot be found in the
 > first package, you should give a try using one of these.

........................... If you cannot find your favorite PIC in the 
first package, you'll find it probably in the second package. Give it a 
try.


 > And please report the results to jallib's group, so we can increase
 > the number of tested chip!

.......................chips!


> We tried to keep existing and mostly used libraries as much as possible.

.............include

{ not mention of the <register>_<bitfield> naming convention?? }

> Some haven't changed, some have been refactored, some still need to be
> integrated. Remember, whatever the library in jallib, there's always a small
> sample, showing a basic usage of it. This is a very convenient way to get
> started. You'll also have HTML documentation for each library, with links to
> the several available samples.
> 
> We tried to test as much as possible, and currently working hard to provide

...........................................are

> more on these tests. This beta release is... beta... so there might be bugs
> :) Help us improving jallib, and report any bugs, suggestions, feeback, even
> libraries etc... either on this list, in our issue tracker (
> http://code.google.com/p/jallib/issues/list) or in jallib's group (
> http://groups.google.com/group/jallib). We're also looking for testers, who
> could help to perform tests on several different PICs. And, if you dare to
> put your head over the mowing field, and if you're ready to embrace the
> Jallib Style Guide, join us as an official jallib comitters!

....................................................committer!

> Finally, we really would like to thank here Stef Mientki and Wouter van
> Ooijen, who allow us to use and integrate their own libraries. And... of

..............allowed

> course, Kyle York, because nothing of this is useful without a great
> compiler.
> 
> Thanks & Have fun !
> 
> 
> The Jallib team.

-- 
Rob Hamerling, Vianen, NL (http://www.robh.nl/)

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