On Friday, February 26, 2016 20:01:59 Jos Poortvliet wrote: > On Wednesday, February 24, 2016 10:22:22 PM AMT Stephen Kelly wrote: > > Valorie Zimmerman wrote: > > > Oooo, Steve! Thank you for capping off an excellent discussion. > > > > > > On Tue, Feb 23, 2016 at 1:46 PM, Stephen Kelly <[email protected]> wrote: > > >> I think the form > > >> > > >> "A world in which everyone has <foo> their digital life" > > >> > > >> is fantastic! > > >> > > >> It doesn't mention KDE. It doesn't have a 'subject' at all. > > >> It has a very-inclusive object: 'everyone' > > >> It is inspirational > > > > > > After reading all of the above, which put into words my inchaote > > > > > thoughts, I would like to offer the following version: > > It seems your thoughts are not the same as my words at all :). Your > > suggestion seems to be exactly the opposite of what I wrote in many ways. > > > > Maybe I don't understand what you mean or what you want to communicate > > with > > that sentence. > > > > > KDE: control your digital life > > > > You dropped the reference to 'everyone'. You added a reference to KDE. You > > dropped the 'a world in which' making it less inspirational. Altogether it > > seems to me more like a marketing slogan. > > > > Can you say why you made those changes? > > > > Something I think you are right about is: > > > Freedom, technology, software, privacy, all of that is IN there. > > > > So for me, this is quite good: > > "A world in which everyone has control in their digital life" > > > > I think it is good for all of the same reasons in my previous email. It is > > also more concise. > > I think she got sidetracked by the search for a slogan - I had the same, > really liking what she wrote, then reading your mail and realizing it was a > slogan, not a vision... > > "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life" (in -> over) > seems a great vision.
personally I'd like to have included that this can be done - independent from the commercial interest of companies, i.e. no product lock- in - available for everybody to use, i.e. more or less free of cost - using solutions which can survive long-term, i.e. the sources should be available Is all that implied by the your suggestions ? Alex _______________________________________________ kde-community mailing list [email protected] https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-community
