Am 15.03.2016 um 22:15 schrieb Alexander Neundorf: > On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 08:26:15 Stephen Kelly wrote: >> Lydia Pintscher wrote: >>> Hi everyone, >>> >>> "A world in which everyone enjoys freedom and privacy and has control >>> over their digital life." >>> >>> Unless there are major objections within the next week I would like to >>> conclude the process and from now on use this as our vision statement. >> >> Not a major objection, but some feedback: It's very wordy at the end >> especially with all the 'and's in it. > > I agree, the two "and"'s sound a bit bumpy/"holprig".
To add another point of view: when I first read that statement I just thought, "wow, how eloquent, this is perfect!" It feels easy to read and understand and it is to the point. > I very much like that freedom is in there, this fit's my wish to express some > kind of independence. > How about skipping the "privacy" ? This is with no or only very little > interpretation included in "have control". I would not drop anything from it because freedom and privacy are essential--*especially* privacy since it is so often breached these days; so to state it explicitly is important. cheers, Michael _______________________________________________ kde-community mailing list [email protected] https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-community
