On Samstag, 19. März 2016 21:52:09 CET Michael Brade wrote: > Am 19.03.2016 um 21:30 schrieb Alexander Neundorf: > > On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 22:53:03 David Jarvie wrote: > > ... > > > >> This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis: > >> > >> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys > >> freedom and privacy." > > > > How about one more tweak ? > > > > "A world in which everyone can manage their digital life enjoying freedom > > and privacy."
One can "manage" something without having full control over it, so I'd like us to keep the control part in there. > Well, that's two tweaks (SCNR ;) > > But I like the idea, so how about really just one tweak: getting rid of > the double "and": > > > "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life, enjoying > freedom and privacy." Makes it even better! _______________________________________________ kde-community mailing list [email protected] https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-community
