Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2008-04-04 19:03:00 -0600 (Fri, 04 Apr 2008)
New Revision: 8515

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux-ng.xml
Log:
Two minor textual improvments

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml     2008-04-03 16:44:21 UTC (rev 8514)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml     2008-04-05 01:03:00 UTC (rev 8515)
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
     -e 's@/var/spool/mail@/var/mail@' etc/login.defs</userinput></screen>
 
     <note>
-      <para>If you built Shadow with Cracklib support, run the 
following:</para>
+      <para>If you chose to build Shadow with Cracklib support, run the 
following:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>sed -i '[EMAIL 
PROTECTED]@DICTPATH\t/lib/cracklib/pw_dict@' \
     etc/login.defs</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux-ng.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux-ng.xml      2008-04-03 16:44:21 UTC (rev 
8514)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux-ng.xml      2008-04-05 01:03:00 UTC (rev 
8515)
@@ -64,6 +64,8 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen>
 
+    <para>Install the package:</para>
+
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>

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