[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote these words on 04/04/08 20:03 CST:

> Two minor textual improvments
>
> -      <para>If you built Shadow with Cracklib support, run the 
> following:</para>
> +      <para>If you chose to build Shadow with Cracklib support, run the 
> following:</para>

Actually, the best would be:

If Shadow was built with Cracklib support...

If I had to choose, I'd say the above is best, how it was is next
best and how it is now is third best. Just my opinion, but "If you
chose to build.... is so wordy when getting directly to the point
is so much cleaner and more meaningful.

"If you chose to build..." doesn't even mean it *was* built with
Cracklib support. You may have chose to, but failed to do it for
whatever reason.

-- 
Randy

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