Pretty good, but a few points...
On Mar 7, 2000 at 21:36, Erle Pereira wrote:
> 1. more / less links
Suggest putting http:// before all links that lack them. That is the Right
Thing to do.
s/LINUX/Linux/g;
s/your/you're/; in some places. Sorry, pet peeve.
Watch those capitals.
X Windowing System, X, etc. A nitpick, but that's how it is. Another Right
Thing.
>is so stable and "refreshing to work with" as a friend once told me. It
>could be because there is no one organisation working on it.
Could you rephrase that last clause? It can be taken ni a negative manner.
Initially I read that as "there is no organisation working on it".
You will run a grammar and spellcheck, of course?
Good job!
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