Hi Spencer,
> On 22 Apr 2016, at 16:37, Spencer Dawkins at IETF > <[email protected]> wrote: > [snip] > > > > Your clarification made your meaning much clearer. If this paragraph wasn't > the result of weeks of negotiation, perhaps > > "The LISP Working Group is chartered to work on the LISP technology. It will > rely on technologies developed in other working groups, but if it identifies > needs for extensions or modifications, those extensions and modifications > will be addressed in the working groups that developed those technologies." > The sentence reads better, much better. I would just use “It may use” instead on “It will rely on”. So that it will be: "The LISP Working Group is chartered to work on the LISP technology. It may use technologies developed in other working groups, but if it identifies needs for extensions or modifications, those extensions and modifications will be addressed in the working groups that developed those technologies." What do you think? L.
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