Hi Les,

I'm afraid I don't see how this revision resolves my DISCUSS point,
which is that Section 7.5 creates a registry under "Expert Review"
terms; BCP 26 pushes the point that such a registry definition should
include guidance to the Designated Expert about how to handle new
applications, but Section 7.5 doesn't.

On the other hand, Section 7.3 gets this right; note its last paragraph.

For that matter, BCP 26 recommends including a "Change Controller"
column, but neither registry created here does so.  Is that
intentional?

https://tools.ietf.org/html/bcp26#section-4.5

-MSK

On Thu, Jun 11, 2020 at 10:16 AM Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
<[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Folks -
>
> This update to the draft addresses comments from the following IESG reviewers:
>
> Murray Kucherawy
> Martin Duke
> Rob Wilton
> Roman Danyliw
> Deborah Brungard
> Benjamin Kaduk
>
> It also includes grammatical corrections related to the use of "which/that".
>
> A special thank you to Acee Lindem for his tireless efforts to improve my 
> grammar.
>
>   Les
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Lsr <[email protected]> On Behalf Of [email protected]
> > Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 10:06 AM
> > To: [email protected]
> > Cc: [email protected]
> > Subject: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> > directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : IS-IS TE Attributes per application
> >         Authors         : Les Ginsberg
> >                           Peter Psenak
> >                           Stefano Previdi
> >                           Wim Henderickx
> >                           John Drake
> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> >       Pages           : 21
> >       Date            : 2020-06-11
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    Existing traffic engineering related link attribute advertisements
> >    have been defined and are used in RSVP-TE deployments.  Since the
> >    original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional applications (e.g.,
> >    Segment Routing Policy, Loop Free Alternate) that also make use of
> >    the link attribute advertisements have been defined . In cases where
> >    multiple applications wish to make use of these link attributes, the
> >    current advertisements do not support application specific values for
> >    a given attribute, nor do they support indication of which
> >    applications are using the advertised value for a given link.  This
> >    document introduces new link attribute advertisements that address
> >    both of these shortcomings.
> >
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-te-app/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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> >
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