Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo-24: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi, Thanks for this document. I don't really have much to say. I was slightly surprised by the IPR declaration 3910, which unless I am misreading it, seems to be asserting possible IPR on the BCP 14 text (i.e., section 2 of revision 03)! Perhaps worth flagging to see if an update to the IPR declaration is needed? One minor nit: (1) p 3, sec 1. Introduction This document also specifies a way for a router to use IGPs to associate one or more Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane (SR- MPLS) Prefix-SIDs [RFC8660], or Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6) locators [RFC8986] with a particular Flex-Algorithm. I found this sentence clunky to parse/understand - possibly putting quotes around "Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane" and "Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6) locators" would help. Regards, Rob _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
