Hi Robert,
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Hi,
Thanks for this document. I don't really have much to say.
I was slightly surprised by the IPR declaration 3910, which unless I am
misreading it, seems to be asserting possible IPR on the BCP 14 text (i.e.,
section 2 of revision 03)! Perhaps worth flagging to see if an update to the
IPR declaration is needed?
will try to get that fixed, it's a mistake likely.
One minor nit:
(1) p 3, sec 1. Introduction
This document also specifies a way for a router to use IGPs to
associate one or more Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane (SR-
MPLS) Prefix-SIDs [RFC8660], or Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6)
locators [RFC8986] with a particular Flex-Algorithm.
I found this sentence clunky to parse/understand - possibly putting quotes
around "Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane" and "Segment Routing over
IPv6 (SRv6) locators" would help.
done.
thanks,
Peter
Regards,
Rob
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