Hi Peter, Thanks. I think that John has already followed up and flagged the IPR, so probably nothing more that needs to be done from your side on that.
Thanks, Rob > -----Original Message----- > From: Peter Psenak <ppse...@cisco.com> > Sent: 06 October 2022 12:33 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwil...@cisco.com>; The IESG <i...@ietf.org> > Cc: draft-ietf-lsr-flex-a...@ietf.org; lsr-cha...@ietf.org; lsr@ietf.org; > Christian > Hopps <cho...@chopps.org>; Acee Lindem (acee) <a...@cisco.com>; > j...@juniper.net > Subject: Re: [Lsr] Robert Wilton's No Objection on > draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo-24: > (with COMMENT) > > Hi Robert, > > please see inline: > > > On 05/10/2022 18:12, Robert Wilton via Datatracker wrote: > > Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for > > draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo-24: No Objection > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot- > positions/ > > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT > positions. > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo/ > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > Hi, > > > > Thanks for this document. I don't really have much to say. > > > > I was slightly surprised by the IPR declaration 3910, which unless I am > > misreading it, seems to be asserting possible IPR on the BCP 14 text (i.e., > > section 2 of revision 03)! Perhaps worth flagging to see if an update to > > the > > IPR declaration is needed? > > will try to get that fixed, it's a mistake likely. > > > > > One minor nit: > > > > (1) p 3, sec 1. Introduction > > > > This document also specifies a way for a router to use IGPs to > > associate one or more Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane (SR- > > MPLS) Prefix-SIDs [RFC8660], or Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6) > > locators [RFC8986] with a particular Flex-Algorithm. > > > > I found this sentence clunky to parse/understand - possibly putting quotes > > around "Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane" and "Segment > Routing over > > IPv6 (SRv6) locators" would help. > > done. > > thanks, > Peter > > > > Regards, > > Rob > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Lsr mailing list > > Lsr@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr > > _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
