Attached is a diff that should satisfy everything Pete just brought up. Please let me know if there are any objections. Since most of this is well-baked and I don't believe any of it changes what the WG is actually trying to say (i.e., it's mostly about better choice of language and expression), I'll post a new version in the next couple of days unless there's objection. Then hopefully we can get this one moving.
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