On Thursday, April 26, 2012 02:07:34 AM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote:
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Pete Resnick [mailto:[email protected]]
> > Sent: Wednesday, April 25, 2012 5:07 PM
> > To: Benoit Claise
> > Cc: Murray S. Kucherawy; [email protected]; marf-
> > [email protected]; The IESG; [email protected]
> > Subject: Re: Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-marf-as-14: (with
> > DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > 
> > After chatting with Benoit offline, I now believe that your addition
> > actually increased confusion rather than decreased. What I think you
> > want to say is something like, "Further introduction to this topic may
> > be found in 6449, which has more information about the general topic of
> > abuse reporting. Many of the specific ARF guidelines in this document
> > were taken from the principles presented in 6449." The text you've got
> > now 'buries the lead'.
> > 
> > Not required, but I think this might help.
> 
> I'm fine with that if you want to do it as an RFC Editor note.  If you need
> a -17, let me know.

If you do a -17, please fix the believe thing too.

Scott K
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