<quote who="Luis Villa"> > If someone could proof/comment, I'd appreciate it.
Suggestions: * remove "Desktop and Platform" from the heading and para 1, because we ship more than the desktop and platform, and calling the whole thing "GNOME X" a stronger message of coherency. * remote "providing... work done" -> we provide more than that, and our users aren't "average". ;-) If you want to keep this sentence, perhaps change it to something in the second person, "all the tools you need..." * <ul> for release notes languages? * would be good to put the press release and community announcement up the top, and remove the icky "people who actually did the work" bit. * <ul> for press release languages? - Jeff -- linux.conf.au 2006: Dunedin, New Zealand http://linux.conf.au/ "We live in a place where policy discussion is conducted with money." - Eben Moglen -- marketing-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
