<quote who="Luis Villa"> > > and remove the icky "people who actually did the work" bit. > > I was attempting there to make it non-marketese; am open to other > explanations of what the community announce is.
Right, but there's non-marketese and there's ugly, unwelcoming phrases. How about "is the official community announcement, and the press release is..." - Jeff -- UbuntuBelowZero http://wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuBelowZero "'Cause remember, smug is beautiful." - Zachary Beane -- marketing-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
