For the first sentence, maybe change "This survey is being conducted on behalf of the Apache CloudStack PMC" to "This survey is being conducted on behalf of the Apache CloudStack Project Management Committee (PMC)."
Other than that - looks good to me! Thanks, Karen -----Original Message----- From: John Kinsella [mailto:j...@stratosec.co] Sent: Thursday, June 19, 2014 8:11 AM To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org Cc: sebgoa Subject: Re: cloudstack survey For 9, maybe "Are you a member of an Apache CloudStack user group?" On Jun 19, 2014, at 7:08 AM, Giles Sirett <giles.sir...@shapeblue.com<mailto:giles.sir...@shapeblue.com>> wrote: All I have been working with Sebastien to create a cloudstack usage adoption survey. We have a beta survey here: http://www.formwize.com/run/survey3.cfm?idx=505d040e080008 Some of you have previously given some great input on this, and I have tried to accommodate that input. Mark H shared a previous survey he put out (cloudstack pre-ASF days) . Although I have lifted some questions from that, I felt that a lot of it was generalised cloud computing questions and that including them would increase the overall length and potential drop out rate Please could I ask some people to go through this survey and provide comments of the questions/format The tool we've used (kindly donated by BT) will allow us to embed the survey in CS.org<http://cs.org/> - I would propose doing that once we've got the questions bottomed out Kind Regards Giles Giles Sirett CEO D: +44 20 3603 0541 | S: +44 20 3603 0540 | M: +44 796 111 2055 giles.sir...@shapeblue.com<mailto:giles.sir...@shapeblue.com> | www.shapeblue.com<http://www.shapeblue.com/> | Twitter:@shapeBlue<https://twitter.com/#!/shapeblue> Find out more about ShapeBlue and our range of CloudStack related services IaaS Cloud Design & Build<http://shapeblue.com/iaas-cloud-design-and-build//> CSForge - rapid IaaS deployment framework<http://shapeblue.com/csforge/> CloudStack Consulting<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-consultancy/> CloudStack Infrastructure Support<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-infrastructure-support/> CloudStack Bootcamp Training Courses<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-training/> This email and any attachments to it may be confidential and are intended solely for the use of the individual to whom it is addressed. Any views or opinions expressed are solely those of the author and do not necessarily represent those of Shape Blue Ltd or related companies. If you are not the intended recipient of this email, you must neither take any action based upon its contents, nor copy or show it to anyone. Please contact the sender if you believe you have received this email in error. Shape Blue Ltd is a company incorporated in England & Wales. ShapeBlue Services India LLP is a company incorporated in India and is operated under license from Shape Blue Ltd. Shape Blue Brasil Consultoria Ltda is a company incorporated in Brasil and is operated under license from Shape Blue Ltd. ShapeBlue is a registered trademark. Stratosec<http://stratosec.co/> - Compliance as a Service o: 415.315.9385 @johnlkinsella<http://twitter.com/johnlkinsella>
