On Thu, 2011-05-12 at 00:34 -0400, Marc Paré wrote: > Hi Drew et al > > Sorry about the previous post. I hit the wrong button. > > Le 2011-05-11 18:21, drew a écrit : > > Hi Tim, others > > > > Just to let you know - I've taken the tri-fold pamphlet you mention > > there and reworked it, for the scatter branding. (That and I really did > > not like the 'dental chart' on the inside..) > > > > You can find the results here: > > http://lo-portal.us/temp/LibOPamphlet-may-11a.pdf > > > > (.odt is sitting next to it) > > > > If I don't get any 'could you change' type feedback, then I'll go ahead > > and push this to the wiki (pdf and odt) > > > > Thanks > > > > Drew > > > > > > Thanks for doing this Drew. I think we need to review all of the > marketing tools and add the scatter wherever we can. It just jazzes up > everything really well. > > The only comments I have is p.1, 3rd panel The "Multi-language office > suite for" should be capitalized as it is a title and looks a little > unbalanced. > Would it be OK to put: > > Multi-Language Office Suite for > Microsoft Window > Gnu/Linux > Mac OSX
Alright > > This would give it a triangular shape, lead the reader to the bottom > LibreOffice logo and I think it would look nicer to the eye. > > If we do this, then we would want to copy this list order on p.2, panel > 1 and have: > > "MS Windows, Gnu/Linux, Mac OS X" and OK There was also some feedback, via PM, from Tim - so here you go, with all of the changes http://lo-portal.us/temp/LibOPamphlet-may-11b.pdf //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
