Hi all, Florian and Simon, thanks I am glad you like it. I added two new files with different text like Simon asked:
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:See_banner_ss3b.png and http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/f/f0/See_banner_ss2b.png Feel free to take a look at my wiki page: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/User:See Once again, thanks for your feedback Aleksandar 2011/9/26 Simon Phipps <[email protected]> > > On 25 Sep 2011, at 21:49, Christoph Noack wrote: > > > > > > > Please check whether the banners are okay - marketing-wise. For > > feedback, please use either the marketing list (reply to this mail) or > > the design list. Since these banner closely follow our branding language > > (see later), I suggest to replace the older proposals with these new > > ones. So, please tell us whether everything fits (size, format, > > claim, ...) ... or not ;-) Comments appreciated... > > These are good work - thanks, See. > > Personally, I would change the order of the words. I would write: > > Power-packed personal productivity suite > Free, libre and open source for > Windows, Macintosh and GNU/Linux > > That makes the core descriptive text together and makes it strongly > alliterative, puts the differentiating values on their own line and means > that each line has a distinctive purpose. > > Cheers, > > S. > > > -- > Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] > Problems? > http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ > All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be > deleted > > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
