Awesome - I love it, naturally :-) Thanks,
S. On 26 Sep 2011, at 14:58, Aleksandar wrote: > Hi all, > Florian and Simon, thanks I am glad you like it. > I added two new files with different text like Simon asked: > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:See_banner_ss3b.png > and > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/f/f0/See_banner_ss2b.png > > Feel free to take a look at my wiki page: > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/User:See > Once again, thanks for your feedback > Aleksandar > > 2011/9/26 Simon Phipps <[email protected]> > >> >> On 25 Sep 2011, at 21:49, Christoph Noack wrote: >> >>> >>> >>> Please check whether the banners are okay - marketing-wise. For >>> feedback, please use either the marketing list (reply to this mail) or >>> the design list. Since these banner closely follow our branding language >>> (see later), I suggest to replace the older proposals with these new >>> ones. So, please tell us whether everything fits (size, format, >>> claim, ...) ... or not ;-) Comments appreciated... >> >> These are good work - thanks, See. >> >> Personally, I would change the order of the words. I would write: >> >> Power-packed personal productivity suite >> Free, libre and open source for >> Windows, Macintosh and GNU/Linux >> >> That makes the core descriptive text together and makes it strongly >> alliterative, puts the differentiating values on their own line and means >> that each line has a distinctive purpose. >> >> Cheers, >> >> S. >> >> >> -- >> Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] >> Problems? >> http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ >> Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette >> List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ >> All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be >> deleted >> >> > > -- > Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] > Problems? > http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ > All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
