I think the light green letters are too light to easily read the text on the light background. Could use use a darker green color for the small text lettering? I would prefer to use that light background, if the text was darker so it was easier to read.

I just added the dark green banner to the top of my personal page. I will do it for my free software page as well [soon]. I will replace it with the other one, once the small text lettering is easier to read.


On 09/26/2011 11:48 AM, webmaster for Kracked Press Productions wrote:

Can we use them now?
I sure will until there are final ones. I have been using the "unbranded" logo as a banner.


On 09/26/2011 10:17 AM, Simon Phipps wrote:
Awesome - I love it, naturally :-)

Thanks,

S.

On 26 Sep 2011, at 14:58, Aleksandar wrote:

Hi all,
Florian and Simon, thanks I am glad you like it.
I added two new files with different text like Simon asked:

http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:See_banner_ss3b.png
and
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/f/f0/See_banner_ss2b.png

Feel free to take a look at my wiki page:
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/User:See
Once again, thanks for your feedback
Aleksandar

2011/9/26 Simon Phipps<[email protected]>

On 25 Sep 2011, at 21:49, Christoph Noack wrote:


Please check whether the banners are okay - marketing-wise. For
feedback, please use either the marketing list (reply to this mail) or the design list. Since these banner closely follow our branding language
(see later), I suggest to replace the older proposals with these new
ones. So, please tell us whether everything fits (size, format,
claim, ...) ... or not ;-) Comments appreciated...
These are good work - thanks, See.

Personally, I would change the order of the words. I would write:

Power-packed personal productivity suite
Free, libre and open source for
Windows, Macintosh and GNU/Linux

That makes the core descriptive text together and makes it strongly
alliterative, puts the differentiating values on their own line and means
that each line has a distinctive purpose.

Cheers,

S.


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