Le 11/05/13 08:32 PM, Jean Weber a écrit :
Here is my latest iteration of the Letter version of the draft
brochure. See what you think.
https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LO4-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInfo-USLtr_JHW_rev.odt
https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LO4-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInfo-USLtr_JHW_rev.pdf
I'll do the A4 version if you like this one.
--Jean
Thanks.
IMO, the only thing I would have a problem with is p.2, third panel, The
passage:
* "The LibreOffice user interface is available in many languages, even
in languages for which localized commercial software is not available.
Support for over 100 languages and still counting."
The separation of the last two lines ... the last line "languages and
still counting" looks like it no longer belongs to the paragraph and we
should avoid hyphenating the word "languages", By convention, we should
be writing "one hundred" when writing in paragraph form which would fix
the problem, but the number "100" has larger impact. I would then
suggest remove the bold sentence and just make "100 languages" in bold
and this still seems to bring home the point that we support over "100
languages".
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I am not sure of the centered text on p.2 top of panel 1:
LibreOffice is a free, power-packed,
open source productivity office suite for
MS Windows, Mac OS X, and GNU/Linux
As it is the only centered text left on the panels, it looks a little
out of place. Perhaps flush-right would look better? I printed out both
centered and flush-right.
Alternatively, we could leave that passage centered, add an extra empty
line at the end of the paragraph; on the next paragraph, leave as is,
but, make the line:
"LibreOffice is the suite for you."
Change it to centred, "heading 2"; change it to green (same as the above
"MS Windows, Mac OS X, and GNU/Linux"; remove the "italics" on the line;
add an exclamation mark at the end of the sentence for added subliminal
effect.
"LibreOffice is the suite for you!"
This seems to balance the panel more and when printed all of the
"headings" look centered on the printouts. Have a look a the .png and
.odt files here:
http://parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/LO4-CommunityBrochure_GeneralInfo-USLtr_MP_rev.png
http://parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/LO4-CommunityBrochure_GeneralInfo-USLtr_MP_rev.odt
Cheers,
Marc
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