Hi Drew and everyone, PFA PDF and Doc with Comments.
What do you think? B. On Sun, Nov 25, 2018 at 1:33 PM Bhairavi Parikh <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Drew, > > I'm a copywriter and also on the LibreOffice marketing group. > > I've tried to set up an account on Next Cloud but am unable to. > Is it possible for you to share a JPG with me so I can suggest changes to > the copy? > > Who is our target audience for this piece? In what places will it appear - > online and offline? > > Regards, > Bhairavi. > > On Sun, Nov 25, 2018 at 10:12 AM Drew Jensen <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> Howdy, >> >> OK, so I've taken what I've heard on the list here, thanks again, and make >> some changes to this file. >> >> First the graphics design elements. I pulled the libo6 branding zip file >> off the wiki (and the 5), I used the logo from this branding kit and then >> did a merge of part of the 4 branding and the 6 gray gradient branding. (I >> do the final background work with GIMP and did not upload the xcf file, >> but >> I would do so when this is finished along with odt in a zip file) >> >> I did this specifically to come at one of the points, raised here on the >> list, of presenting the change without causing undue concern regarding the >> current UI, with the message. >> You can see this in the file here: ChangingFaceOfLibreOffice.jpeg >> https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/f/84391 >> >> Text wise you will see it is reading more like a document page than a >> marketing piece, well I figure that I can try to kill two birds with one >> stone today. >> The odt file that is used is also available if you have a NC account and >> is: ChangingFaceOfLibreOffice.odt >> https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/f/84046 >> >> Assuming that the graphics stay as is, for the moment, and any wordsmith >> ideas on presenting the information in the text towards marketing would be >> deeply appreciated. >> >> Thanks and best wishes, >> >> Drew >> >> p.s. deleted the earlier jpeg off the NC server >> >> -- >> To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] >> Problems? >> https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ >> Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette >> List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ >> Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy >> > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy
