Hi Drew and everyone,

PFA PDF and Doc with Comments.

What do you think?

B.

On Sun, Nov 25, 2018 at 1:33 PM Bhairavi Parikh <bhair...@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Drew,
>
> I'm a copywriter and also on the LibreOffice marketing group.
>
> I've tried to set up an account on Next Cloud but am unable to.
> Is it possible for you to share a JPG with me so I can suggest changes to
> the copy?
>
> Who is our target audience for this piece? In what places will it appear -
> online and offline?
>
> Regards,
> Bhairavi.
>
> On Sun, Nov 25, 2018 at 10:12 AM Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Howdy,
>>
>> OK, so I've taken what I've heard on the list here, thanks again, and make
>> some changes to this file.
>>
>> First the graphics design elements. I pulled the libo6 branding zip file
>> off the wiki (and the 5), I used the logo from this branding kit and then
>> did a merge of part of the 4 branding and the 6 gray gradient branding. (I
>> do the final background work with GIMP and did not upload the xcf file,
>> but
>> I would do so when this is finished along with odt in a zip file)
>>
>> I did this specifically to come at one of the points, raised here on the
>> list, of presenting the change without causing undue concern regarding the
>> current UI, with the message.
>> You can see this in the file here: ChangingFaceOfLibreOffice.jpeg
>> https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/f/84391
>>
>> Text wise you will see it is reading more like a document page than a
>> marketing piece, well I figure that I can try to kill two birds with one
>> stone today.
>> The odt file that is used is also available if you have a NC account and
>> is: ChangingFaceOfLibreOffice.odt
>> https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/f/84046
>>
>> Assuming that the graphics stay as is, for the moment, and any wordsmith
>> ideas on presenting the information in the text towards marketing would be
>> deeply appreciated.
>>
>> Thanks and best wishes,
>>
>> Drew
>>
>> p.s. deleted the earlier jpeg off the NC server
>>
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