Chris, darling, it seems you haven't heard my tone for far too long. Whatever you bend to project onto gruff, stop taking your drugs, read his bio when you're sober and look straight at who is trying to make gruff her victim again. Come back when your zero calories appetite flash is quenched elsewhere and then let's get back to do some productive work here.
On 4 Mai, 22:46, Chris Jenkins <[email protected]> wrote: > Rough day, Gruff? Your response seems unnecessarily harsh given the sentiment > offered. > > > > [ Angehängte Nachricht ]Von:gruff <[email protected]>In:"\"Minds Eye\"" > <[email protected]>Datum:Mon, 4 May 2009 08:15:45 -0700 > (PDT)Lokal:Mo 4 Mai 2009 17:15Betreff:[Mind's Eye] Re: Why be moral? > > " ... On May 3, 7:17 am, Molly Brogan <[email protected]> > wrote: ... " > > > I need to abstain here, gruff, as this is what I do for a living. > > Your statement leaves me puzzled and wondering. What is it you do for > a living that forces you to abstain from offering a critique. It > can't be that you're a writer because critiques are something most > writers do well and love doing. Mayhap it's because you're a vanity > press writer? I've seen your rankings on Amazon and I seriously doubt > you're making a living from it. > > > In the parameters of this forum, I would encourage you to keep working > > through story, and as you do, let go of the identity that you derive > > from it. We all have our stories to tell and there are so many > > wonderful stories. In the telling, at some point, we can let go of > > them and move into our potentiality. What a powerful ending to a good > > story. > > I'm sorry Molly but as usual your words are elegant but seem to lack > any real content. Just exactly what does it mean to let go and move > into potentiality? My first chapter may not have your elegance but > it certainly is real. It's flesh and blood, grit and struggle, not > flowery words that melt into vaporous mist at the first contact with > reality. > > > An embrace with a thousand arms of compassion straight from my > > heart is the best I can offer. Good luck to you in this endeavor. > > First you tell me to let it go and move on, then you wish me good luck > in my endeavor? I can't let it go and luck is the hobgoblin of people > who can't make their own way. That piece I wrote is part and parcel > of who and what I am. If you couldn't deal with this first chapter > than you certainly won't be able to deal with what follows because it > gets bloodier, grittier and more real than anything I think you could > imagine. The world is not as vaporous and ethereal as you like to > paint it. It's much harsher and dirtier. I also find it hard to let > your thousand arms embrace me. They are as as unreal as your > perceptions of life. > > But that aside, I wish you good luck with your own endeavors. > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups ""Minds Eye"" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/Minds-Eye?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
