Hi,

The original wording doesn't seems to flow too well:

"Create pkg/PLIST. After the install is complete use the developer's
command, make plist which makes the file PLIST in the pkg directory.
This file is a candidate packing list."

I would like to suggest changing to the followig:

"Create pkg/PLIST. After the installation is done, use the developer's
command make plist, which creates the file PLIST in pkg sub-directory.
It will be a template for this port."

The patch to my suggestion is at the bottom of this mail, ok?

Regards,
Edward.

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@@ -498,10 +498,9 @@ generated packing-lists). Remember that 
 For automatic updating of <tt>/etc</tt>, sysmerge(8) may help.
 <br><br><li>
 Create <tt>pkg/PLIST</tt>.
-After the install is complete use the developer's command,
-<tt><b>make plist</b></tt> which makes the file <tt>PLIST</tt> in the
-<tt>pkg</tt> directory.
-This file is a candidate packing list.
+After the installation is done, use the developer's command 
+<tt><b>make plist</b></tt>, which creates the file <tt>PLIST</tt> in 
+<tt>pkg</tt> sub-directory. It will be a template for this port.
 <p>
 Peruse <tt>PLIST</tt> and verify that everything was installed and that it was
 installed in the proper locations.

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