Dear all,
I went through the I-D and it appears to me it is in a sufficiently
mature state, thus I support its advance as Experimental. Besides, I
have the following editorial suggestions:
### Section 1 ###
1) The first sentence repeats the use of "describe" verb. I propose
improving it to:
"The base solution for providing continuous multicast service delivery
in Proxy Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6) domains is described in [RFC6224]."
2) "referred to"" --> "referring to" / "regarding" / "which refer to""
3) In the motivation, two actions are referred for minimizing the "gap"
in content reception. The buffering at the pMAG, which as stated could
be achieved by adapting RFC5949, and the rapid transfer of subscription
information to the new MAG. For the sake of completeness, should it also
be indicated that this could be achieved by adapting RFC4067? E.g. as
proposed in
draft-vonhugo-multimob-dmm-context-00
?
5) The solution must optimise the handover performance respect to the"
--> "with respect to the (...)"
6) Regarding the sentence: "The solution should minimize the number and
extent of additional support required in the network, aiming at an
easier deployment."
Should the meaning of "additional support" be further explained?
Best regards,
Sérgio
On 07/15/2013 05:34 PM, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:
Folks,
This message starts a four week
Multimob Working Group last call
on advancing:
Title : PMIPv6 multicast handover optimization by the
Subscription Information Acquisition through the LMA (SIAL)
Author(s) : Luis M. Contreras Carlos J. Bernardos
Ignacio Soto Filename :
draft-ietf-multimob-handover-optimization-03.txt Pages
: 37 Date : 2013-07-08
as Experimental. Substantive comments and statements of support
for advancing this document should be directed to the mailing list.
Editorial suggestions can be sent to the authors. This last call will
end on August 9, 2013.
Regards,
Behcet
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