Benoit Claise <bcla...@cisco.com> wrote:
> Hi Lada,
> 
> Thanks for the quick reply.
> > Hi Benoit,
> >
> > thank you for the review, please see my responses inline.
> >
> > Benoit Claise <bcla...@cisco.com> writes:

[...]

> >>      o  identity,
> >>
> >> There is no identity definition in the RFC 6020 terminology section.
> > Maybe it is an omission in 6020bis?
> Ok, let's fix it in 6020bis then.

Ok.  First I wrote:

 o  identity: A globally unique, abstract, and untyped identity.

But this is kind of recursive...

 o  identity: A globally unique, abstract, and untyped label.

Any other proposal?



/martin







> >
> >> -
> >>     module foomod {
> >>
> >>        namespace"http://example.com/foomod";;
> >>
> >>        prefix "foo";
> >>
> >>        container top {
> >>          leaf foo {
> >>            type uint8;
> >>          }
> >>        }
> >>      }
> >>
> >> Use "example-" in the module name, as mentioned
> >> inhttps://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-05:
> >>
> >>          Example modules are non-normative, and SHOULD be named with the
> >>          prefix "example-".
> >>
> >> Same remark for module barmod (and btw, pay attention to the "import
> >> foomod") and module exmod
> > I agree with Juergen that 6087bis should distinguish between complete
> > example modules and short module snippets that are used for explaining
> > a
> > certain YANG language or encoding issue. If you look at this
> > particular
> > example, then changing the JSON document on p. 6 to
> >
> >     {
> >       "example-foomod:top": {
> >         "foo": 54,
> >         "example-barmod:bar": true
> >       }
> >     }
> >
> > would IMO just add noise and blur the message the example is supposed
> > to
> > convey.
> So please fix the text in 6087bis.
> Until it's done, I'll stick to the current rule.
> 
> Regards, Benoit
> 
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