> On 03 Feb 2016, at 15:35, Martin Bjorklund <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Benoit Claise <[email protected]> wrote:
>> Hi Lada,
>>
>> Thanks for the quick reply.
>>> Hi Benoit,
>>>
>>> thank you for the review, please see my responses inline.
>>>
>>> Benoit Claise <[email protected]> writes:
>
> [...]
>
>>>> o identity,
>>>>
>>>> There is no identity definition in the RFC 6020 terminology section.
>>> Maybe it is an omission in 6020bis?
>> Ok, let's fix it in 6020bis then.
>
> Ok. First I wrote:
>
> o identity: A globally unique, abstract, and untyped identity.
>
> But this is kind of recursive...
>
> o identity: A globally unique, abstract, and untyped label.
>
> Any other proposal?
s/label/name/ ?
Lada
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> /martin
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>>>
>>>> -
>>>> module foomod {
>>>>
>>>> namespace"http://example.com/foomod";;
>>>>
>>>> prefix "foo";
>>>>
>>>> container top {
>>>> leaf foo {
>>>> type uint8;
>>>> }
>>>> }
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> Use "example-" in the module name, as mentioned
>>>> inhttps://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-05:
>>>>
>>>> Example modules are non-normative, and SHOULD be named with the
>>>> prefix "example-".
>>>>
>>>> Same remark for module barmod (and btw, pay attention to the "import
>>>> foomod") and module exmod
>>> I agree with Juergen that 6087bis should distinguish between complete
>>> example modules and short module snippets that are used for explaining
>>> a
>>> certain YANG language or encoding issue. If you look at this
>>> particular
>>> example, then changing the JSON document on p. 6 to
>>>
>>> {
>>> "example-foomod:top": {
>>> "foo": 54,
>>> "example-barmod:bar": true
>>> }
>>> }
>>>
>>> would IMO just add noise and blur the message the example is supposed
>>> to
>>> convey.
>> So please fix the text in 6087bis.
>> Until it's done, I'll stick to the current rule.
>>
>> Regards, Benoit
>>
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