Hi Mahesh, On 10/25/17, 9:22 PM, "Mahesh Jethanandani" <[email protected]> wrote:
>Acee, > >Thanks for reviewing the draft. > >> On Oct 25, 2017, at 6:21 AM, Acee Lindem (acee) <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hi Kent, Mahesh, et al, >> >> I have read the draft and support publication. I have two comments on >>the >> -14 version. >> >> 1. The tree diagrams do not fit within the draft pages. Note that >>recent >> versions of pyang support the —tree-line-length parameter and this may >> help. > >I used the —tree-line-length=72 as the parameter to generate the tree, >and that is why you see the line wrap around. I guess then you need to manually format it so it fits. > >> 2. While it is non-normative, I’d prefer to have appendix A.1 removed. >> It was a mistake for vendors to mix packet filtering and route filtering >> in the first place and the draft should not insinuate that the model >>will >> be augmented to do this. > >The example is just an example of how the model can be extended. There is >no implication that the model will be augmented to support mixing of >packet filtering with route filtering. I understand that. However, it is more an example of how it should not be used. Do you really want to publish this? Thanks, Acee > >> >> Thanks, >> Acee >> >> On 10/20/17, 5:37 PM, "netmod on behalf of Kent Watsen" >> <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: >> >>> >>> All, >>> >>> This starts a two-week working group last call on >>> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14. >>> >>> The working group last call ends on November 3. >>> Please send your comments to the netmod mailing list. >>> >>> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document >>> and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome! >>> This is useful and important, even from authors. >>> >>> Could the authors, explicitly CC-ed on this email, please >>> also confirm at this time that they are unaware of any >>> IPR related to this draft. >>> >>> Thank you, >>> Netmod Chairs >>> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> netmod mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod >> >> _______________________________________________ >> netmod mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod > >Mahesh Jethanandani >[email protected] > > > _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
