> On Jan 17, 2018, at 2:49 PM, Juergen Schoenwaelder > <j.schoenwael...@jacobs-university.de> wrote: > > Paging through the document, I found the following: > > - The main module uses YANG 1.1, others modules use YANG 1.0. I think > it makes sense to generally use YANG 1.1. (The packet header module > may not need YANG 1.1 but then the main module is YANG 1.1 anyway.)
Will update. > > - Since YANG 1.1 is used, the references to RFC6020 should be replaced > with references to RFC 7950. Will update. > > - The security consideration needs to be updated to follow the newer > template (which also covers RESTCONF). Will add. > > - There is an open issue in the document (section 8) - are we going > to resolve that during WG last call or is this a leftover? This will be resolved in the next version of the module. It is documented under Issues tab in GitHub. Should we remove it from the draft? > > - There are references to RFCs in the YANG modules (in reference > statement) that must also be listed in the text and added to the > references section. This is why you usually find text of the form > > This YANG module imports types from [RFC...] and references > [RFC...], [RFC...], and [RFC…]. Will add. > > /js > > On Wed, Jan 17, 2018 at 09:55:04PM +0000, Kent Watsen wrote: >> All, >> >> This starts a two-week working group last call on >> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15. >> >> This working group last call ends on January 31st. >> Please send your comments to the NETMOD mailing list. >> >> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document >> and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome! >> This is useful and important, even from authors. >> >> Also, could the authors, explicitly CC-ed on this email, >> please confirm at this time that they are unaware of >> any IPR related to this draft. >> >> Thank you, >> NETMOD Chairs >> >> _______________________________________________ >> netmod mailing list >> netmod@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod > > -- > Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH > Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany > Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <https://www.jacobs-university.de/> > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod Mahesh Jethanandani mjethanand...@gmail.com _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
