Juergen, Does the update address all your concerns? Do you feel there is a need for another LC
Hi Balazs, Did you mean to send this to the netmod-chairs alias? Oh well, as long we’re here, following are some questions/comments: Have the YANG modules been validated and tested for formatting? (i.e., pyang -f yang --keep-comments --yang-line-length 69 filename) Have the examples in the draft validated against the YANG module? Please review the Normative/Informative status of the references. Not looking carefully, but RFCs 2119 and 8174 should be Normative, and I think RFCs 3688 and 6020 should be Informative, right? All of the “import” statements in the YANG module are missing a “reference” statement. Please add a paragraph to Section 5.2 preceding the YANG module indicating all the aforementioned Normative references. The copyright in the YANG module needs to be 2020 (not 2019) Please ensure a blank line between paragraphs in the “description" statements. Please add a statement to the Introduction regarding why the module Isn’t compliant with NMDA. The tree diagram does not adhere to the syntax described in draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext. Please update the first sentence in Section 5.1 to also reference draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext. Please ensure that the planning-text version of the draft passes IDNITS (https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits) at the “verbose output” level and correct any issues found, or explain why they shouldn’t be corrected. Thanks, Kent // shepherd > On Feb 14, 2020, at 11:03 AM, Balázs Lengyel <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Hello Chairs, > I replied to Juergen, and exchanged some additional mails with him. I updated > the draft to draft-ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format-07. Please take it > forward in the process. > > https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=ed368c2e-b1bcaefa-ed36ccb5-0cc47ad93e6a-1bf0817821133165&q=1&e=b8630aed-b037-42b0-a579-0e6e8067e0eb&u=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format-07 > Regards Balazs > > -----Original Message----- > From: netmod <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Kent Watsen > Sent: 2020. február 9., vasárnap 20:23 > To: [email protected] > Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: > draft-ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format-06 > > This message closes the WGLC. > > Authors, please respond to Juergen’s message from Jan 20, ultimately posting > an update to the draft. > > Thanks, > Kent // as shepherd > > > >> On Jan 7, 2020, at 7:41 AM, Kent Watsen <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> >> This begins a two-week Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on >> draft-ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format-06. The WGLC ends on Jan 21. >> Please send your comments to the working group mailing list. >> >> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is >> ready for publication", are welcome! This is useful and important, even >> from authors. Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at >> this time. >> >> Thank you, >> NETMOD Chairs >> >> _______________________________________________ >> netmod mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
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