At 12:07 AM 2/14/02 -0800, Clark Peterson wrote: >6. This module uses Open Game Content from both the >Creature Collection and Creature Collection 2: Dark >Menagerie published by Sword & Sorcery Studios. That >Open Game Content includes content designated as >Product Identity. Such Product Identity is used here >by specific permission. Any such content that was >previously designated as Product Identity is hereby >designated as Product Identity by reason of being so >designated in the original work. The following list >details the Open Game Content used in this product, >its source and any Product Identity designation:
This paragraph seems way more verbose than it needs to be. Perhaps there are overriding legal reasons why you've worded it this way, but especially since you are spelling out below exactly what is OGC and what's PI for each item, I think something like this might be better: This module uses Open Game Content from both the Creature Collection and Creature Collection 2: Dark Menagerie published by Sword & Sorcery Studios. That Open Game Content includes content designated as Product Identity, which is used here by specific permission. The following list details these item, and their designations as Open Game Content or Product Identity: >a. The monsters "Blue Lotus Flower" and "Silver Golem" >are Open Game Content used from Creature Collection >and their names are designated as Product Identity; > >b. The monster template "Belsameth Spider" and the >monster "Quicksilver Golem" are Open Game Content used >from Creature Collection 2: Dark Menagerie and their >names are designated as Product Identity. These are good. I like this. >The above Product Identity is not Open Game Content >and reproduction or use without the written permission >of the copyright holder is expressly forbidden, except >for the purpose of review. I have to agree to Brad here. I'm not sure why you've included this paragraph, when the rules for reproducing OGC and PI are laid out explicitly in the license (which, of course, is also included). Sixten _______________________________________________ Ogf-l mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] http://mail.opengamingfoundation.org/mailman/listinfo/ogf-l
