"is migrate the many legacy" -> "is migrating the many legacy"
"on to Apache servers" -> "onto Apache servers" Aside from that, it looks good to me, though I wonder if the opening paragraph sounds a little Nigerian. Don
"is migrate the many legacy" -> "is migrating the many legacy"
"on to Apache servers" -> "onto Apache servers" Aside from that, it looks good to me, though I wonder if the opening paragraph sounds a little Nigerian. Don