On Wed, 24 Mar 2021 23:18:25 GMT, Nir Lisker <nlis...@openjdk.org> wrote:
>> Jeanette Winzenburg has updated the pull request incrementally with one >> additional commit since the last revision: >> >> fixed missing/incorrect @since tags in new api doc > > modules/javafx.controls/src/main/java/javafx/scene/control/SkinBase.java line > 250: > >> 248: * >> 249: * @param observable the observable to observe for invalidation >> events >> 250: * @param consumer the consumer > > Could be just me because I'm unfamiliar with this API, but I'd like to see an > explanation for what the consumer is used for. If the consumer is executed on > invalidation events on this observable, then clearly state it. Maybe the doc > could be something like: > > Registers an action to take when an {@code Observable} is invalidated. > An {@code InvalidationListener} is registered on the given {@code > observable} and the {@code consumer} is run > whenever the listener sends an invalidation event. If multiple consumers > are registered on the same observable, > they are run in the order in which they were registered. > > @param observable the observable to observe for invalidation events > @param consumer the action to take when the observable is invalidated > > Since it's a `protected final` method, I don't think that the "Subclasses can > use this..." portion is necessary - that's the only use of these methods. Changed the api doc along your suggestions (for invalidationListener related methods only - those for the other types of listener will be changed analogously once the wording is agreed on :) did deviate a bit from your suggestion in - instead of _action to take_ I used _operation to perform_ because in ui contexts, _action_ feels a bit loaded and the replacement is from the doc of Consumer in its overview and method doc for accept - removed mentioning of InvalidationListener: while we do have it, the when/how/how many are added is an implementation detail Also clarified the null handling: both parameters can be null, if so nothing happens. Still not quite clear, when to use code tags in the description (vs. plain words) - [styling doc](https://www.oracle.com/de/technical-resources/articles/java/javadoc-tool.html) seems to advocate it for all class names, actual java doc (including javafx doc) seems to use it inconsistently. ------------- PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jfx/pull/409