On Wednesday 18 May 2011 17:05:59 Jos Poortvliet wrote: > Dear marketeers, > > For those among us (esp our ambassadors) who frequently talk to people > about openSUSE, I have drafted up three elevator pitches for respectively > beginner, advanced and pro linux users to explain to them why THEY should > check out openSUSE. > > The pitches can be found on http://en.opensuse.org/openSUSE:Why_openSUSE
I checked the elevator pitches. Some great improvements, thanks! Esp the 'key points' are awesome :D But when I tried to say them in 30 seconds, I discovered they are way too long. I should've tested them the first time I wrote them, sorry!!! I made new ones on top, which are really about 30-40 seconds. Very difficult to make a 30 sec openSUSE description but that is what they were supposed to be... Review them on http://en.opensuse.org/openSUSE:Why_openSUSE Should we remove the long ones to clean up the page? I have also put them in the attached document and I want to print them on a4 and ship them with our event boxes to our ambassadors. So they can use them! It'd be nice if we could get translations for that. So the german people get german pitches, the French French ones etc. So who will send me a translated version of the attached document? xxx Jos
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