Two cents about the wording from a non-native english speaker

old:
  This plugin implements the SvcOpenSCManager() and
  SvcEnumServices() calls to obtain, using the MS-DCE/RPC
  protocol over SMB, the list of active and inactive services and drivers
  of the remote host.
proposed:
This plugin implements the SvcOpenSCManager() and SvcEnumServices() calls to 
obtain the list of active and inactive services and drivers of the remote 
host, using the MS-DCE/RPC protocol over SMB.

old:
  Solution : To prevent the listing of the services for being
  obtained, you should either have tight login restrictions,
  so that only trusted users can access your host, and/or you
  should filter incoming traffic to this port.
proposed:
not sure, something with "the listing of the services for being obtained" 
sounds weird. Maybe: "To prevent access to the services and drivers 
list..." ?

--felix

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