Hello,
sometimes people prefer "indirect" or "reflexive" sentences. If this wans to
be applied, my suggestion (over the last nasl attached in Goran's mail)
would be:
Current:
Solution : To prevent access to the services and drivers
list, you should either have tight login restrictions,
so that only trusted users can access your host, and/or you
should filter incoming traffic to this port.
Proposed:
Solution : To prevent access to the services and drivers
list, you either tight login restrictions should be in place,
so that only trusted users are able to access the host, and/or
incoming traffic to this port should be filtered.
Best regards,
Jonás Andradas.
2010/2/10 Goran Ličina <[email protected]>
> Proposals accepted ;)
>
> Corrected plugin is in attachment.
>
> Thanks Felix!
>
> Regards,
>
> Goran
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: [email protected] [mailto:openvas-
> > [email protected]] On Behalf Of Felix Wolfsteller
> > Sent: Wednesday, February 10, 2010 10:55 AM
> > To: [email protected]
> > Subject: Re: [Openvas-plugins] smb_enum_services.nasl
> >
> > Two cents about the wording from a non-native english speaker
> >
> > old:
> > This plugin implements the SvcOpenSCManager() and
> > SvcEnumServices() calls to obtain, using the MS-DCE/RPC
> > protocol over SMB, the list of active and inactive services and
> > drivers
> > of the remote host.
> > proposed:
> > This plugin implements the SvcOpenSCManager() and SvcEnumServices()
> > calls to
> > obtain the list of active and inactive services and drivers of the
> > remote
> > host, using the MS-DCE/RPC protocol over SMB.
> >
> > old:
> > Solution : To prevent the listing of the services for being
> > obtained, you should either have tight login restrictions,
> > so that only trusted users can access your host, and/or you
> > should filter incoming traffic to this port.
> > proposed:
> > not sure, something with "the listing of the services for being
> > obtained"
> > sounds weird. Maybe: "To prevent access to the services and drivers
> > list..." ?
> >
> > --felix
> >
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