> Two cents about the wording from a non-native english speaker
>
> old:
> This plugin implements the SvcOpenSCManager() and
> SvcEnumServices() calls to obtain, using the MS-DCE/RPC
> protocol over SMB, the list of active and inactive services and drivers
> of the remote host.
> proposed:
> This plugin implements the SvcOpenSCManager() and SvcEnumServices() calls to
> obtain the list of active and inactive services and drivers of the remote
> host, using the MS-DCE/RPC protocol over SMB.
Maybe even:
This plugin implements the SvcOpenSCManager() and
SvcEnumServices() calls. These calls obtain the list of active and
inactive services and drivers of the remote host. Both calls use the
MS-DCE/RPC protocol over SMB.
>
> old:
> Solution : To prevent the listing of the services for being
> obtained, you should either have tight login restrictions,
> so that only trusted users can access your host, and/or you
> should filter incoming traffic to this port.
> proposed:
> not sure, something with "the listing of the services for being obtained"
> sounds weird. Maybe: "To prevent access to the services and drivers
> list..." ?
Was it supposed to be "services from being obtained"?
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