Hi Dan, Thanks for your comments.
2013/10/30 Romascanu, Dan (Dan) <[email protected]> > Hi, > > I have read draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-extension-01. I am no expert in IEEE > 802.11 technology, so I cannot confirm the accuracy of the .11-related > information in this I-D. It looks like straight forward and consistent > work, but it needs review from the IEEE experts as long as several > editorial improvements. > > IEEE experts have reviewed the draft during the September IEEE 802 wireless interim meeting. The 01 version draft has been updated according to the comments received. > Here are my comments (mostly editorial, but important to make the document > readable and usable): > > 1. The document obviously updated RFC 5416. This needs to be mentioned in > the Header. Moreover, there must be some information about the migration or > coexistence from a previous CAPWAP environment that did not support IEEE > 802.11n and a new environment that supports .11n and the CAPWAP extensions > defined in this document > The coexistence mechanism could be simple: just ignore the message if not supported. > 2. The document needs a section of abbreviations - expand and explain if > necessary what OFDM, MIMO, etc. mean > OK > 3. There is a need of cleaning the English syntax - preferable by a native > English speaker. > OK, we will clean the text and find a native speaker to review. > 4. Keywords need to be used in a manner that is consistent and conforms to > RFC 2119. For example the 'may' in the first paragraph of Section 4.2, or > in the first paragraph of section 4.3 need to be capitalized. > OK > 5. Some of the fields need to have the units for the parameters added - > e.g. MaxRxFactor, Min StaSpacing, HiSuppDataRate > 6. In Section 5.3 I could not understand what 'Report Count: The channel > number will be reported' - is it a number or a count? > It is a count. Since this draft has been reviewed by IEEE experts and only editorial comments left, the authors believe it is ready for WGLC. Regards, Dapeng Liu Thanks and Regards, > > Dan > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > OPSAWG mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg > -- ------ Best Regards, Dapeng Liu
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